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**章教育类话题**章教育类话题是托福独立写作中*常考的话题，话题涉及选课、课堂组织形式、师生关系、课外活动等方面，考生多少有些了解，结合自己平时所见所闻和个人经历都能写出一些内容；考题类型比较常规，通常都是二选一或者三选一，推荐的写法是选定一个内容，分析其合理性或者益处即可。 通常来说，这些题目乍一看都很容易理解，写出一篇 500 词左右的文章似乎不难，但是当题目问得非常具体，比如“大学生应不应该上公共演讲课？”，同学们可能就无话可说了，语言质量也不尽如人意。因此，我们把同类话题都放在一起，帮助同学们整理不同话题中常用到的论点及语料。这些内容在考题之间有一些共通之处时，稍加调整就可以拿来用。 下列选题同属教育类范畴，极具代表性，所用到的理由和例子都是积累的上好素材。遇到同类型题目时构思起来会轻松很多。1. (20180909) Students should be encouraged to study fields like science, technology, engineering, math (STEM) rather than what they have interest in.?? 头脑风暴??这道题问的是学生们应该选择学习科学技术类的学科，还是选择自己更感兴趣的领域。在头脑风暴时可以分别思考这两方面的优缺点，选择你认为理由比较充分的观点来写。如果选择学习科学技术类的学科，这一类的学科实用性可能会更强，相关工作报酬丰厚，对未来的职业发展有所帮助；但是这类学科可能会难度比较大，在就业时竞争激烈。如果选择自己喜欢的学科，则更能激发自己的学习兴趣，使自己在擅长的领域有更好的发展。但是未来职业选择可能有限。论点： 应当选择自己更喜欢的领域学习。理由一： 选择自己更感兴趣的领域能够激励学生追求更高的目标，在学习中有更好的表现。理由二： 选择自己感兴趣的领域可以使学生在专业领域上更擅长，从而使他们在求职时有更大的优势。理由三： 虽然 STEM 类学科实用性强，但是它们不一定能成为学生学习的动力。Education is one of the keywords of this age since it has anoverall impact on people’s quality of life, both intellectually andfinancially. However, people’s views differ greatly as to which shouldbe the priority of academic pursuit, to study the STEM subjects or tofocus on subjects that interest them. As I see it, choosing to specializein one’s favorite courses is more commendable.To begin with, opting for the courses that greatly interest thestudents will drive them to achieve higher goals. When students’motivation is stimulated by the subject exerting a special fascinationon them, they are likely to spend more time on it and accomplishbetter academic performance. According to a recent study conductedby the Society of Developmental Psychology, primary-school studentswould spend approximately three more hours each week on subjectsthey are interested in than on other subjects, and score about 10%higher correspondingly. This trend is also valid when it comes to highschool students. As revealed by a research of Rice University, over95% of the students who had won an award in the state mathcompetition have demonstrated their interest in math at an early age.Therefore, students who are interested in the classes they are takingare more likely to have better academic performance.?? 范文思路??Besides, learning subjects that students are interested in canfacilitate them to secure a good job. Under such a society full of fiercecompetition, it is the professional skills people own that make themstand out. And only when people select the field they are passionateabout can they establish a solid foundation of specific knowledge andskills in this field. My cousin Anthony’s experience can well illustratethis point. Fascinated by medicine, he started reading a mass of articlesand books about the discipline since an early age. After entering thePh.D. program of Medicine at Yale, he constantly stood out among hispeers in his knowledge about medicine. Because of his preeminence,he was immediately employed by one of the best medical companiesafter graduation. Till now, he is the leading researcher in the companyand earns a high payment. Hence, learning courses catering tostudents’ interest can better improve their competence, thus increasingtheir likelihood of securing a decent job.Granted, courses like science, technology, engineering, and mathare technical, most of which can be applied in solving real-worldissues. However, technically oriented classes do not serve as animpetus for learning, a stimulus for growth, or a trigger for action.Instead, fields that interest students encourage them to learn more andperform better, thus guaranteeing students a competitive edge toensure future jobs opportunities.To sum up, given the discussion above, we can firmly draw theconclusion that it is better to study subjects that interest the students,in terms of making them have a better grasp of their knowledge andfind a suitable job.?? 语料积累??本篇文章的语料适用于涉及兴趣、选择类的话题。词组differ greatly as to... 在……议题上有不同意见as to 关于specialize in 专长／专注于opt for=choose 选择drive them to achieve higher goals 促使他们达到更高的目标（ drive 一词在语境中有“促使，引导”的意思）exert a fascination on... 引起……的兴趣establish a foundation of... 为……打下基础secure a good job 找到一份好工作under such a society full of fierce competition 在这样一个充满激烈竞争的社会里cater to students’ interest 迎合学生的兴趣improve their competence 增加他们的竞争力guarantee students a competitive edge 保证学生们的竞争优势句型Education is one of the keywords of this age since it has an overall impact on people’s quality of life, both intellectually and financially. 教育是这个年代的关键词之一，因为它对人们的生活质量，包括智力和经济方面，都起到总体的影响。（可作为教育类话题背景句使用）it is the professional skills people own that make them stand out 使人们与众不同的是他们所拥有的专业技能（这是一个强调句用法， it is...that... 强调的重点在于 it is 后的内容）an impetus for learning, a stimulus for growth, a trigger for action 激发学习兴趣、促进成长、引发行动（是托福很喜欢的排比句式）从这篇文章中，大家不难看出作者在例子积累方面的功底之深。在**个主论点中，作者提出了心理学中的研究数据，在第二个主论点中，作者使用了自己身边人的事例。在读范文时，同学们也可以学习不同作者使用例子去展开段落、支持自己论点的方法，同时从中积累自己的例子库。?????????? ??