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**部分 英文学术论文写作常见问题概述 1. 标题译写常见问题及分析 1.1 名词性标题的译写 1.2 典型的冗余表达 1.3 文化差异 2. 摘要译写常见问题及分析 2.1 汉语摘要的英译 2.2 典型的冗余表达 2.3 时态／语态问题 3. 论文正文写作常见问题及分析 3.1 引言语步逻辑混乱 3.2 文献罗列堆砌，只综不述 3.3 表达过于重复 3.4 语气过于绝对 3.5 结论与摘要内容重合 4.词汇问题及分析 4.1 专业术语表达不够精准 4.2 常用词的深度学习不够 4.3 冠词使用凌乱 5. 语句写作常见问题及分析 5.1 “复杂句”的写作 5.2 “逗号”病 5.3 主语缺失 5.4 状语堆砌前置 5.5 平行结构不平行 6. 小 结 第二部分 英文学术论文实例修改与解析 第1篇 Redundant measurement—based second—order mutual difference adaptive Kalman filter 1. Introduction 2. Related work 3. Main results 4. Adaptive filtering based on R—PSOMD 5. Simulations 6. Conclusion 第2篇 Improved-Bayesian Optimized-Least-Squares Algorithm for Target Localization and Tracking in Wireless Sensor Networks I.Introduction II.Predictive Position Analysis and System Model III.Improved Bayesian Optimized Least-Squares Algorithm IV.Parameter Determination V. Simulation ResuIts VI. Conclusion 第3篇 Dynamic response and residual stress field of Ti6A14V alloy under shock waves induced by laser shock peening 1. Introduction 2. Material and LSP dynamic meehaniSm 3. LSP simulation 4. Results and discussion 5. Conclusion 第4篇 Improved performance of co-sputtered Ni.Ti oxide films for all-solid—state electrochromic devices 1. Introduction 2. Experimental 3. Results and discussion 4. Conclusion 后 记 参考文献